Do you think this song is good?

This is my song to meet my husband.It has a special value for me…
What’s your opinion?

Summary

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Song :metal:t2: You can open the link here

Here are the lyrics of the song…

No night, no day
Can not endure in this world, why?
I shouted to the mountains, he wouldn’t hear
I have waited for days, there is no coming

Someone lived behind the snowy mountains
It would be cloud, it would rain, it would look at us
It was both near and far
Her cheeks are swallowed

My crazy girl wake up
The rumors are lies
My crazy girl wake up
You are the only one who hears
You are the only one who hears

I’ve been on the ground, I’ve been in the sky
Don’t ask me, my head is smoke
The heart does not know how to settle down
My dreams are true, my truth is a lie

Someone lived behind the snowy mountains
It would be cloud, it would rain, it would look at us
It was both near and far
Her cheeks are swallowed

My crazy girl wake up
The rumors are lies
My crazy girl wake up
You are the only one who hears
You are the only one who hears

Hi.

Reminder that per Rule 9 of the #forum-rules (Click hashtag for a refresher if unsure), topics on the forum must still be loosely associated with Empires and Puzzles.

I’m sure there are other forums / websites out there which would be better suited to discussing personal song writing.

All the best & I hope your hubby loves the song as much as you seem to love him.

Guv.

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